Sunday, April 10, 2011

Photopoetryblog: Before the Eclipse

Poem: "El silencio de la luna: Tema y variaciones" by Jose Emilio Pacheco
Photo: "Before the Eclipse" by me

El silencio de la luna


"…et iam Argiva phalanx instructis navibus ibat
a Tenedo, tacitae per amica silentia lunae…"
Eneida II, 254-255
"… ya la falange de las griegas naves
de Ténedos venía, bajo el velo
del silencio amistoso de la luna…"
Aurelio Espinosa Pólit,
Virgilio en verso castellano
1
El aire está en tiempo presente.
La luna por definición en pasado.
Tenues conjugaciones de la noche.
El porvenir ya se urde
en los fuegos que hacen el alba.
Invisible para nosotros, porvenir nuestro,
como otro sol en la maleza del día.
2
Noviembre, y no me fijo en los troncos desnudos,
sólo en las siemprevivas y en las plantas perennes.
Ignoro la respuesta: su verdor,
en medio del desierto de la grisura,
¿es permanencia, obcecación, desafío?
O quizá por indiferentes
desconocen la noche de los muertos.
Al prescindir del viaje renunciaron al goce
de la resurrección
que habrán de disfrutar sus semejantes:
siemprevivas porque antes ya se han muerto,
perennes porque saben renacer como nadie.
3
Cuánto ocaso en el día que ya se va
y parece el primero en estar muriendo.
Son las últimas horas del gran ayer.
De mañana ignoramos todo.
4
Después de tanto hablar
guardemos un minuto de silencio
para oír esta lluvia que disuelve la noche.

[My rough translation of the poem:
The silence of the moon
"…et iam Argiva phalanx instructis navibus ibat
a Tenedo, tacitae per amica silentia lunae…"
Eneida II, 254-255
"… now the Grecian naval phalanx from
Tenedos was coming, under the veil
of the friendly silence of the moon…"

1
The air is in the present time.
The moon by definition in the past.
Tenuous night conjugations.
The future is already hatching
in the fires lit by the dawn.
Invisible to us, our future,
like another sun in the weeds of the day.
2
November, and I don't notice the naked trunks,
only the evergreens and perennials.
I ignore the answer: their verdure,
in the middle of the graying desert,
is it permanence, obstinacy, defiance?
Or maybe in their indifference
they ignore the night of the dead.
Disregarding the journey, they gave into the joy
of the resurrection
that their others were to enjoy:
evergreen because before they have already died,
perennial because they know how to be born again like no one.
3
So much twilight in the fleeting day
and it appears to be the first one to be dieing.
They are the last hours in the grand yesterday.
In the morning we ignore everything.
4
After so many words
we keep a minute of silence
to hear this rain that dissolves the night.

again, my apologies to Jose E. Pacheco for my translation]

3 comments:

Robin said...

Thanks for translating;) It's lovely.

Robin said...

BTW- the photo is really cool. The word verification for this comment is bravo. My feelings exactly.

Ben said...

Pacheco might thank you for the translation, since his "versions" tend to be loose translations of other works or citations from others.

When I read your blog I wish I had more time to read poetry and more time to take photos. Good work Sir.